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Color Girl- Fifth Color by Oxdarock Color Girl- Fifth Color by Oxdarock

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And so ends another chapter of Color Girl, and what a cliffhanger! What will happen to our big blue busty beauty now that she's stuck in a bathroom?! (wow, that's a lot of B's). And while she's here, what happened to our mult-hair colored hero? All this and more next time! (Not sure when that'll be though, lol).

First Color
Second Color
Third Color
Fourth Color

All characters are © of Onyx Azor
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Blackbeast42 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2014
Iris reminds me of Gin Ichimaru from Bleach. Can't wait for next update. You do awesome work.
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lilyflower332 Featured By Owner Jan 24, 2014
moar?
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Dragon-6860 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
Hmm...I will admit, I'm a bit uncertain about the story. I do enjoy expansion and blue girls, but I dunno. I suppose some of the implications of the story are making me a bit ehhh. I'll wait and see how things develop though, and see where the story goes.
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Oxdarock Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013   Digital Artist
 What about the story makes you a bit ehhh? 
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Dragon-6860 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
Well, the implications of the nano-stuff (She's now essentaly an addict who can never get over her addiction, with bad withdrawl effects) and the characterization of the little robot. Also, pretty much what is in this story, her life is now essentially over unless the nanobots can be removed.
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Regreme Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
Sad chapter, but still amazingly well done. Eager to see more.^^
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Nightmare49 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Well, its perverted yet that's not the main focus. That's something i like
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mathmeistro Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
I like the change of perspective- interesting way to show both sides of the story.
Great story... but I absolutely HATE cliffhangers.
NOOOOOOOOOOO!
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Dragonkingmark Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
aww man, poor girl, transforming and scared of what others would think...quick better have something to help her
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TheFwank Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2013
F yes, more Color Girl! :D

The "vilains" are still a tiny bit... ehh... ^^;   But I love the story more with every chapter! :D
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